Written on the Front Lawn

Each night since you left
the view's been the same:
a blue, empty barn,
the light I left on,
the pushpin of Venus
not budging overhead.

photograph by Rachel K


Katie said...

I love the image of Venus in the night sky. You are so wonderful! You say so much with so few words.

Kate Horowitz said...

Thank you, Katie. I read a lot of haiku and one of my goals is to get that same economy of language that the best haiku writers have.

Nick Vale said...

Elegant. If you're shooting for economy then you're in the right lane.

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