6.04.2009

After Three Days of Rain


The white irises
are rumpled, look like
your sheets in the morning.






iris photograph by Mike VanDerWalker

2 comments:

Kate Horowitz said...

I'm really unsure about the possessive in the last line. "Your" is laden but it might be too laden. Our? Her? My?

Thoughts?

Mr. Apron said...

Our. Make it universal. After all, we're all basically just slobs and whorebags, and none of us make our beds.

Even those of us with white sheets.


 photo copyright.jpg
envye template.